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Book Critique 2016 – 03/01/2016: Viper Game (Ghostwalker Series #11)

Mar 31 2019: Updated the review and added Spoiler Alerts

Continuing with the critiques I started in 2015, here is the next in series – a book review.
Prologue: Go here.
For review of all books under Ghostwalker series: Go here.

Stars: 4 / 5
Recommendation: A good one to have the continuity of the series involving mystery, eroticism, science and undefined.

Viper Game was the 11th book in the Ghostwalker Series by Christine Feehan published in January of 2015. The plot is centered around Wyatt Fontenot - member of GhostWalker Team Four - and - Le Poivre "Pepper" - one of the girls from Dr. Whitney's Group Three. The plot is set in Louisiana bayous.

GhostWalkers are a group of women and men who are sent on special missions. They have enhances psychic and physical abilities along with genetic modifications, using in some cases not just human genes but all kinds of animal and plant genes. However every GhostWalker would need an "anchor" to draw back the psychic backlash, especially that would instigate violence. They are complex characters trying to live with their enhanced abilities and at the same time fight against the corrupt people around them, executing their missions successfully. So far we are introduced to two teams of GhostWalkers Men serving in various areas of law enforcement and armed forces and one group of Orphan Girls on whom Dr. Peter Whitney had experimented. He has paired each of his GhostWalker men with the women in the hopes to breed the next generation of GhostWalkers.

In Shadow Game we had seen that Dr. Lily Whitney-Miller, married to Captain Ryland "King" Miller - head of Team One - find the details of the Orphan Girls that Dr. Peter Whitney had experimented on along with Lily. Now adopted or held in a different lab or on their own or more girls added as years progressed, Lily and Ryland are determined to find those girls now women, rescue them and provide a safe haven. So far they have rescued Dahlia Le Blanc, Iris "Flame" Johnson, Briony "Bri" Jenkins, Marigld "Mari" Smith, Saber Wynter, Tansy Meadows, Rose Patterson and Azamie "Thorn" Yoshiie.

We met Wyatt Fontenot first in Night Game when he and his brother, Raoul "Gator" Fontenot - member of GhostWalker Team One - when they were looking for a friend - Joy Chiasson - went missing. At the end of that book, we see that Wyatt has romantic feelings towards Joy. The next time we meet Wyatt, it's in Ruthless Game, where he is re-introduced as a GhostWalker with Team Four. And now here we have his story.

Wyatt takes a huge decision to become a GhostWalker, despite the risks and experiments he had heard taken place from Gator and his wife Flame, on a whim of a mistake. And now he returns to the bayou, when his Nonny - Grace Fontenot - asks for help, a killer rather a healer that he was. Before he can reconcile with his family he is faced with threats from a company closer to his home in the form of Le Poirve "Pepper."

Pepper is a discarded experiment by Dr. Whitney, but with abilities of her own and highly enhanced with animal DNA. The attraction between Wyatt and Pepper is instantaneous and explosive. They have another problem they have to fight which is much more than what Dr. Whitney and his allies throw at them; a fight at the more elemental level. And Christine spins her tale around Wyatt and Pepper, keeping every step intriguing, smoking hot and dangerous.

This book reveals another side of Dr. Peter Whitney and shows how much he is evolving even though the ghostwalkers are evolving. Newer scientific experiments, newer genetic injects and newer ways to make a human body a killer - its mind-blowing how far a scientist could go if there were no bounds and had enough wealth. A chill ran up my spine and my hairs stood-up whenever I was reading chapters about Dr. Whitney. Story concocted very well by Christine.

When I had met Christine Feehan in 2016, a few months prior to me writing my first review of this book, I had asked her if she would base one of her stories in India or on India. She had mentioned that she doesn’t have anyone there to help her with research. And I had volunteered myself and my parents for that. I hope she remembers. Anyways, I am glad she put some kind of link to India for Pepper in this plot. Here is my full interview with her.

Christine neatly ties a few loose ends from Night Game, in a pretty bow in this plot, again letting the readers know that she never leaves any single thing in her plots hanging or alone. Somehow they will all come back together in this beautiful tapestry.

Repeat paraphrasing is more than previous books and increasing as the series progressed. Christine this time used words like "rewarded", "praising", "giving her the gift" during the intense sexual scenes between Wyatt and Pepper. Normally I wouldn’t have liked those words, but in this case, they make true sense, literally and figuratively Wyatt was indeed giving  Pepper the gift.

Imagining anyone in Pepper's place makes me cringe. The experiments done on her were so deadly, making her her own enemy. My heart went out to Pepper and at times when Wyatt acted like jerk I felt like slapping his head just like his Nonny would do. Christine created a heroine who is made to be a weapon but abhors being so and wants nothing to do with it. And Pepper suits well.

Another good one to pick up for continuation of the series despite the intense sexual scenes through the plot.

Spoiler Alerts:

1) Plot Reveals:
Christine thanks her dear friend Cheryl L. Wilson again in this book. She has thanked Cheryl in several of Carpathian books from the Dark Series and also in the Leopard Series. We, as readers, know Cheryl Wilson as C. L. Wilson, and for her famous series Weathermages of Mystral.
a. In the facility that Pepper was housed, she took care of three little girls who are triplets - Ginger, Thym and Cannelle - all of the enhanced psychically and physically manipulated with animal DNA.
b. Pepper was trained with five other girls for ten years in a facility as soldiers. So was she part of the breeding program that Dr. Whitney, part of the remaining three girls that escaped?
c. Cayenne - another GhostWalker Woman is kept in the facility along with Pepper, but away from her. Team Four rescue her as well while rescuing the remaining two kids - Thym and Canelle. There is instant attraction between Cayenne and Trap - who had rescued her from the facility. Clear segue that the next plot will be around them.
d. Trap has an assistant, Daryl Monroe, who aids him in his lap.
e. One of the guards, not enhanced, at the facility - Larry - seem to be more inclined to rebel against Dr. Whitney if he knew the truth behind the labs.

2) Sub-Plots:
a. In the first book, Shadow Game, we were introduced to Dr. Brandon Adams - GhostWalkers own doctor who takes care of them as well as keeps them safe from Dr. Peter Whitney and his rogue super humans. In Deadly Game, another doctor, Dr. Eric Lambert, is introduced who takes care of these GhostWalker teams. But he turned out to be rogue in Ruthless Game.
b. In Ruthless Game, Fargo, one of the super soldiers of Dr. Whitney's personal army had been paired with one of the orphan girls in the facility where he was orchestrating his breeding program. And she had tried to almost kill Fargo. I wonder who that orphan girl is.
c. A slight confusion I have as a reader on where the first two teams are located. In Conspiracy Game and after, Christine had GhostWalkers Team One and Two settling in the mountains of Montana. But in Ruthless Game, she has some of them settling in the mountains of Wyoming. And in Samurai Game, she has both Team One and Two living in Montana around the Lolo National Forest. So who is living in Wyoming?
d. GhostWalker Team Two is also sent out an mission at the same that Team One is sent in Samurai Game. Wonder if Christine will have a story from that arc for Team Two sometime in future.

e. GhostWalker Team One, Army Rangers and Army Green Berets; first introduced in the first book, Shadow Game - under direct command of General Theodore Ranier. They make their base in the mountains of Montana along-side Team Two as of Predatory Game.
i. Headed by Captain Ryland "King" Miller - His story was told in Shadow Game, and marries Lily Whitney, adopted daughter of Dr. Peter Whitney, at the end of that book. They have a baby boy - Daniel Ryland Miller - in Predatory Plot.
ii. Nicolas "Nico" Trevane - His story is told in Mind Game, and marries Dahlia Le Blanc at the end of that book.
iii. Raoul "Gator" Fontenot - His story is told in Night Game, and marries Iris "Flame" Johnson at the end of that book.
iv. Kadan Montague, Ryland's second-in-command. His story is told in Murder Game, and marries Tansy Meadows at the end of that book.
v. Sam "Knight" Johnson - His story is told in Samurai Game, and marries Azami "Thorn" Yoshiie at the end of that book.
vi. The rest of the team consists of Jeff Hollister; Ian McGillicuddy; Tucker Addison; Jonas "Smoke" Harper; Kyle "Ratchet" Forbes; Tom "Shark" Delaney, Sr. wrongly enhanced by Dr. Whitney and thrown away, rescued by Kadan in Murder Game.
vii. Jeff Hollister goes through a very tough recovery when he was brutally experimented by Dr. Whitney in the first book, Shadow Game. We see more about him in Murder Game. I would like to see Christine pen a story for him soon more so because he is creeping into the reader's mind slowly.

f. GhostWalker Team Two, Paramilitary Ghostwalkers Team (Navy SEALs) working with NCIS; first introduced in the second book, Mind Game; under direct command of Rear Admiral Frank Henderson. They make their base in the mountains of Montana where Jack and Ken already reside as of Predatory Game.
i. Headed by Logan "Max" Maxwell.
ii. Jack Norton, oldest of the Norton Twins. His story is told in Conspiracy Game, and married Briony "Bri" Jenkins, at the end of that book. They have twins, Jeremiah Ken Norton and Noah Jack Norton, as of Ruthless Game.
iii. Ken Norton, the second Norton Twin. His story is told in Deadly Game, and married Marigold "Mari" Smith at the end of that book. Mari is pregnant with twins as of Samurai Game.
iv. Jesse "Jess" Calhoun - His story is told in Predatory Game, and married Saber Wynter at the end of that book.
v. The rest of the team consists of Martin Howard; Neil Campbell; Trace Aikens; Antonio Martinez (first introduced in Street Game)
vi. When the GhostWalker Team Two was introduced in Mind Game, Christine had mentioned one of the members as Todd Aikens. But in Deadly Game, she names him Trace Aikens. Is he Todd or Trace? Had she named him first as Todd and then later changed it to Trace? Or are there both Todd and Trace?

g. GhostWalker Team Three: Marine Force Recon Urban Warfare Team; first introduced in Predatory Game; under direct command of Sergeant Major Theodore Griffen. 9 men and two women who grew up together to form a family by heart, joined by a newbie now. They make their base in San Francisco, around the warehouse that Jaimie already bought in Street Game, as of Ruthless Game.
i. Headed by Mack "Top" McKinley. His story is told in Street Game and marries Jaimie Fielding at the end of that book, one of the girls in his group.
ii. Kane Cannon - second-in-command to Mack. His story is told in Ruthless Game and marries Rose Patterson at the end of that book. They have a baby boy, Sebastian Kane Cannon, in the middle of the plot.
iii. The rest of the team consists of Javier Enderman; Gideon Carpenter; Brian Hutton; Jacob Princeton; Ethan Myers; Marc Lands; Lucas Atherton; Rhianna "Rhee" Bonds; newbie Paul Mangan;
iv. Brian Hutton, the first member we met in Predatory Plot and had been interested romantically in Patsy Calhoun, Jesse Calhoun's - GhostWalker from Team Two - sister in that plot. Is he paired with Patsy? But Patsy isn't a GhostWalker? Or is she?
v. Rhianna is sent to Mossad on loan and Javier and Rhianna seems to have a history as being lovers in Street Game. She returns to the team in Ruthless Game.

h. GhostWalker Team Four: Air Force Pararescue Special Forces Team; first mentioned in Predatory Game; more revealed in Street Game; plan to make base in Louisiana bayous around Gator and Wyatt's home. More of the team is introduced in this plot.
i. Headed by Joe Spagnola - injured as of this plot.
ii. Rest of the team consists of Malichai Fortunes; Ezekiel "Zeke" Fortunes; Mordichai Fortunes; Trap Dawkins; Draden Freeman
iii. Malichai also gets injured while defending his team and Wyatt's family from the Zombie Soldiers.

i. Group One of Dr. Peter Whitney's Orphans: Twelve orphan girls on whom he had conducted his experiments to make them psychically enhanced - Lily Whitney-Miller, the only girl he had adopted for himself; Dahlia Le Blanc; Iris "Flame" Johnson; Briony "Bri" Jenkins; Marigold "Mari" Smith; Tansy Meadows; Rose Patterson; Jonquille; Laurel; Camellia "Cami".
i. More about them is shown in Deadly Game
1) Ivy, supposedly killed by Dr. Whitney to teach the orphans girls a lesson;
2) Cami and two others live in a secret compound that Dr. Whitney uses for breeding program along with Mari and Rose. In the escape attempt all of them spread away.  Mari and Rose's stories have been told. Now waiting for the others to speak.

j. Group Two of Dr. Peter Whitney's Orphans: First introduced in Predatory Game. It is clear that although Thorn was later on isolated with Saber in a different facility, she was with the others in the Group One in the beginning, per this plot - Saber Wynter; Azami "Thorn" Yoshiie.

k. Group Three of Dr. Peter Whitney's Orphans: First introduced in this plot; originally developed in France but later kept at the facility in the Louisiana bayous for termination; mostly considered rejects by Dr. Whitney: Le Poivre "Pepper" and her triplets - Ginger, Thym and Cannelle "Elle"; Cayenne.

l. Dr. Peter Whitney who thought be dead in the first book Shadow Game, is shown to be alive as well as psychic as of Deadly Game with more devious plots in his mind. As the books progress, we see the various kinds of horrific experiments he had done on the GhostWalkers Men and Women - tracking them with a computer chip in their body; pairing the Orphan girls not only with one of the four Ghostwalker teams, but his personal enhanced team that he created using the rejected psychic candidates as part of his breeding program; injecting them with Zenith, a fast-healing medicine but with serious repercussions; experimenting with animal genes; zombie soldiers with a bonish exoskeleton.

m. Dr. Peter Whitney's allies in his devious plots are:
i. Violet Smythe-Freeman - one of the Orphan Girls from Dr. Whitney's Group in the breeding program - first introduced in Deadly Game, married to Senator Ed Freeman, the one the Norton twins tried to rescue and were in turn kidnapped in Congo, conspires with Dr. Whitney to kill the Senator, gets herself paired with Whitney, so she can get to White House as of this plot.
ii. Jacob Abrams, a loaded banker, and Senator Freeman's father, Andrew Freeman.

3) Grammatical / Historical / Location / Character Errors:
a. On Pg. 72, Line 1, it perhaps should be "He did turn around…"
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